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• 【个人陈述】 留学文书写作范例－计...
  

  倚门回首
  2016-12-09 10:56:03
  PersonalStatementProgramApplied:ComputerScienceEpicurusoncesaid,“Thejoyofpovertyisthemostbeautifulthingintheworld.”Thishasbecomeasourceofconstantinspirationforme.Povertyisveryrealtome,soisthejoythatisderivedfrommybeingabletodevotemyselftothestudyandtheresearchofcomputerscience.MyfatherpassedawaywhenIwasjust14and,withthis,myfamilywasplungedintosuddenpoverty.Inordertosavemoneytoallowmyyoungersistercontinuehereducation,Irelinquishedmyexpensiveundergraduateeducationandchosetoattendajuniorcollegeinstead,majoringincomputerapplication.Forthreeyears,ImadeextraacademiceffortsasIhadtoworkpart-timetoalleviatemyfamily’sfinancialburden.MyGPAwasrankedtopfiveinmyclass,withparticularlydistinguishedperformanceinmathematics.Iwasthesolejuniorcollegestudentwhoparticipatedinthenationalcontestinmathematicalmodelingforuniversitystudentsin1996andwonthethirdprizeinXXProvince.Uponmygraduation,IfoundemploymentwiththeFuelCompanyofXXProvincewhereIworkedasitsnetworkengineerandchiefmanager.Whatwasgoodaboutthisjobwasthatwhileitprovidedmewithastableincomeitallowedmetoreceiveanon-the-jobundergraduateeducationincomputersciencesothatIultimatelyfulfilledmyaspirationofobtainingaBachelor’sdegreeincomputerscience.However,theBachelor’sdegreedidnotputanendtomyacademicpursuit.Realizingtheimportanceandthenecessitytoconstantlyupgrademyprofessionalknowledgeinthisageofrapiddevelopmentininformationtechnology,Ifoundagraduateeducationincomputersciencewouldbevitalformyfurtheracademicandcareerdevelopment.Withdueeffortsinpreparingfortheentranceexamination,IsucceededinenrollinginUniversityofXXwhereIspecializedinComputerScienceandApplicationattheFacultyofComputerScience.Throughmyundergraduateandgraduateprograms,IhaveachievedthetopthirdrankingsinmyoverallGPA,layingasolidacademicfoundationthrough...

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• 【个人陈述】 留学文书写作范例－航...
  

  坠落星韵
  2016-12-09 10:55:14
  PersonalStatementAppliedProgram:AerospaceEngineering\"Onecanneverconsenttocreepwhenonefeelsanimpulsetosoar\"ImustsaythatIamgenuinelygratefultoHelenKellerforarticulatingwhatIhavelongcherishedintheinnermostrecessesofmymind.AtthesametimeIalsocongratulatemyselfonhavingchosenflyingasmyone-timecareer,forithasimpartedtomeboththeimpulseandthedesiretosoarinmylife.TenyearsagowhenIwasanundergraduatefromtheDepartmentofMechanicalEngineeringofTsinghuaUniversity,oreven5yearsagowhenIjustenteredtheChinaCivilAviationFlightUniversity,Ihadthestubbornnotionthat,fortherestofmylife,Iwouldstayonthegroundworkingeitherasamechanistengagedinmechanicaldesigningandthetechnicalimprovementofmaterials.ItneverdawnedonmethatIwouldtranscendallthematter-of-courseoutcomesresultingfrommyfive-yearundergraduatestudiestobecomeapilotofinternationalflights,foratthattimetheideahadneveroccurredtomethatapersoncouldflysofreelyintheinfiniteuniverseofhislife.In1990,IsailedthroughthehighlycompetitiveNationalUniversityEntranceExaminationtobecomeanundergraduateinTsinghuaUniversity.Outofmyinstinctiveinterest,IchosetostudyintheDepartmentofMechanicalEngineering.My5-yearsolidstudiesatthismostprestigiousuniversityinChinaallowedmetoestablishaprofoundtheoreticalgroundworkinmechanicalengineeringandtodevelopanin-depthunderstandingofmechanicaldynamicsanditsoperationprinciple.Duringmygraduationinternship,Idiscoveredthat,becauseoftheairbornesand,thecylinderpistonringofthedesertvehiclewhichdidnotreceivealloysurfacetreatmentfrequentlyincurfrictiondamageandbreaking.Thisnotonlycreatedgreathindrancetothenormaloperationofdesertvehiclesbutalsoseriouslyjeopardizedthelifeandsecurityofpersonneldoingfieldworkinthedesert.Drivenbymysenseofresponsibility,IchoseTheSurfaceAlloyTreatmentoftheCylinderPistonRingofDesertVehiclesbyLaser,ahighlydifficultt...

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• 【个人陈述】 留学文书写作范例－市...
  

  黯然离别
  2016-12-09 09:42:24
  PersonalStatementProgramApplied:MarketingManagementInahighlycompetitiveenvironment,theabilitytocreatecompetitiveedgesoverone’sadversariesandtoachieveultimatevictoryinfiercecompetitionsdependsnotsomuchonmaterialsresourcesasonthementalfactorsofintelligenceandconcepts.Thoseconceptsthatcanleadtonewvisionsandperspectivesandthoseapproachesthatcaneffectivelysolveproblemswillhavethegreatestvalue.Theoverridingfactorwhichensurestheeventualmaterializationofnewconceptsandgivesrisetoeffectiveapproachesismanagement.Asabranchofappliedscience,thescienceofmanagementhascrucialvaluenotonlyfordevelopingcountrieslikeChinawhicharemakinguttermosteffortstocatchupwiththedevelopedcountries,butalsofortheleadingmultinationalgiantsinthedevelopedcountriesthemselves.Forapersonlikemewhohasdecidedtopursuemarketingmanagementasmycareerobjective,tosharpenmyintellectualcaliber,tounderstandtheessenceofmanagementandtograspimportantskillsofmanagementhavebecomemygreatestaspiration.AsaMaster’sstudentspecializinginmarketingandenterprisestrategies,IamveryproudtoreportthatIhavemadesomeencouragingresearchachievements.OfthetworesearchpapersthatIwroteconcerningstrategicdevelopmentofenterprises—EnterpriseStrategicAllianceBasedonResourceComplementarityandTheStrategicOrientationandCountermeasuresforChineseEnterprisesinInternationalOperationsintheNewMillennium,theformerhasbeenpublishedbyEconomicTribuneinSept.2002andthelatterhasbeenacceptedforpublicationbyChinaEconomistsinFeb.2003.ThesetworesearchpapersarethefruitionofmyactiveinvolvementinaresearchprojectnamedStudyonChineseEnterprises’Cooperation-CompetitionModelsinHyper-CompetitiveConditions,whichissponsoredbyChinaStateNaturalScienceFoundation(FoundationProjectNo.70140132).AnotherpaperentitledBrandMarketing:ACompetitiveModeonaHigherLevelinModernEc...

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• 【个人陈述】 留学文书写作范例－自...
  

  时光找茬
  2016-12-09 08:52:23
  PersonalStatement\"Ihavealotofdreams.\"\"Ifwedream,everythingwillbepossible.\"Inretrospect,Ihavemuchtobeproudof.Asa10-year-oldteenager,Iwasalreadyobsessedofpaintingtheconcreteformsofmydreamswiththebrushinmyhand.Atsuchayoungage,Ihadalreadylearnedthenecessitytopracticepaintingdeepintothenightinordertoachieveconstantimprovementinthesophisticationofmybrushwork.Myendowmentsandmydedicationhelpedmesecurethreemajorprizesatinternationaladolescentfineartcompetitions.Mysubstantialprogressinpracticingfineartalsoopenedthedoortodevelopingmyperceptivehorizonandtotappingmytremendouspotential.Asaresult,Ihandledmystudieswithmuchfacility,especiallyinmathematicsforwhichIhadaparticularpenchant.Nomatterhowdifficultthecoursesinmyhighschoolwere,Icouldalmostinvariablyachievefullmarksinallofthem.Apartfromvirtuallyperfectperformanceinthescholasticaptitudesatmyschool,Iachievedremarkablescoresinavarietyofnationalcontestsforhighschoolstudentsinmathematics,physics,andchemistry.ThosedistinguishedachievementsresultedinmybeingenrolledbyTsinghuaUniversity,exemptedfromentranceexamination.InChina,thiscouldproperlybedeemedthehighesthonorthatahighschoolstudentcouldpossibleattain.\"Onthewaytotherealizationofyourdreams,thereisnosubstituteforhardwork\"\"Teamworkfulfillyourdreamseasily\"UponenteringthismostprestigiousuniversityinChina,whichisTsinghuaUniversity,inmyusualspiritofdedicationandperseverance,IonceagainembarkedonmyjourneyofindustriousstudyintheDepartmentofAutomation.MyexceptionallysolidfoundationinmathematicsprovidedmewithasteppingstonewithwhichIproceededontotheexplorationofothersophisticatedanderuditesubjects.Asafreshman,ItaughtmyselfsuchmathematicscoursesasRealAnalysisandAdvancedNumericalAnalysisthatareonlyscheduledforseniorstudents.Myperformanceinallthespecialty-relatedcourseworknotonlyenabledmetose...

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• 【个人陈述】 留学文书写作范例－机...
  

  Arrogant
  2016-12-09 08:46:59
  PersonalStatementAppliedProgram:MechanicalEngineeringInChinathereisanoldcustomcalledone-yearanniversaryfortune-telling:bythetimethenewbornisoneyearold,itsfamilypreparesalotofobjectsofdifferentshapesandfunctionsforittochoosefrom.Thefirstobjectthatattractsitseyesandhandsissupposedtobeasymbolofthebaby’sfuturecareer.Unscientificasitis,ittrulypredictedmyprofessionandfuture.Atthattimethetoycarinmyhandgreatlyarousedmywonderatthewheeledmonster.AsIgrewup,Iwasnolongersatisfiedwithcollectingcarpicturesandmakingcarmodels.Iwasdeterminedtobeanexpertinautomobiledesignandmanufacturing.Asitturnedout,thespecializededucationIhavereceivedinbothmyundergraduateandgraduateprogramshavefullyequippedmeforundertakingmoreambitiousacademictasksinthefieldofmechanicalcontrol.IknowIamnogeniusandIalsoknowthatsuccessistoresultfromextraordinaryefforts.IchoseasmystartingpointBeijingInstituteofTechnology,oneofthe3universitiesinChinathatmajoredinautomobileresearch.Therebesidesthespecialtyandtheorystudies,ImadeuseofmyfreetimetoreadlargequantitiesofreferencesbothinChineseandEnglish,tocatchupwiththelatestdevelopmentintheoryandtobeimmersedinthewidestrangeofinformation.Asagraduate,myacademicperformancehadalwaysrankedNo.1inmyclass,especiallyforthe20alsospecialtycoursesinthejuniorandsenioryears,amongwhichAutomotiveManufacturinggotfullscores.For4yearsIgotthefirstorthesecondclassscholarshipsconsecutivelyandwasawardedmanyhonorssuchasOutstandingStudent,OutstandingCadre,aswellasappraisedbythedepartmentleaderasthebeststudentintherecent5years.Thestronginterestsinautomobileforeverstimulatedmyenthusiasminstudyandmotivatedmetoequipmyselfwithspecialtyknowledgetothegreatestpossibleextent.Apartfromthestudytask,Ialsoservedasteachingassistantinthecourseofvehicleelectronictechnology.Asapostgraduateandwiththespecialtyknowled...

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• 【个人陈述】 留学文书写作范例－临...
  

  茕茕孑立
  2016-12-09 08:21:29
  PersonalStatementProgramApplied:M.D.inClinicalMedicine/GastroenterologyTostrivetobeamongthetop100inmyfieldhasalwaysbeenmyaspiration.Forthematerializationofthisaspiration,Ihavededicatedallmyenthusiasmandenergytomyacademicendeavors—bothmystudiesandresearch—overthepastfewyears.However,tomydismay,theunsatisfactoryresearchconditionsinChinahavecausedtheresearchandthetherapeuticlevelinthefieldofmyspecialization,namelyclinicalmedicine/Gastroenterology,tolagbehindthoseofthedevelopedcountriesintheWestbyatleast10years.ManyoftheoriginalideasthatIhavedevelopedoncertainissuesinmyfieldcannotbefullyputintopracticeonaccountofthelimitationsinpersonnel,experimentalfacilitiesandresearchfunds.Consequently,IstronglywishthatIcanbeadmittedintoyouresteemeduniversitytoundertakeanadvanceddegreeprograminclinicalmedicine&gastroenterology.Ihavecherishedadeepandlongyearningforachancetostudyatyouruniversity.AsearlyastheyearswhenIwasanundergraduateattheDepartmentofMedicineofXX(Provincial)MedicalUniversity,IhadachancetoreadthebookTheReachofHelicobacterPylorieditedbysomeprofessorsofyouruniversitywhichinfluencedmetotakeupthestudyofdigestivediseasesasmyareaofspecialization.Later,duringmyMaster’sprogram,Ifocusedonthedevelopmentofthechronicstomachdisease(gastrosia)andtheincidenceofthegastriccancer.ThecomprehensiveresearchandpracticethatIhaveperformedinthisareafurtherreinforcemydeterminationtoseekadvancedstudiesatyouruniversitywhenthereshouldbeanopportunity.Thisisbecauseyouresteemeduniversityenjoysaveryhighacademicreputationfortheresearchworkyouhavecarriedoutinthefieldofdigestivediseasestudy.ThisensuresthatifIcanbeadmittedintoyourprogramIwillbepartofyourwell-respectedprogramandIwillbeabletoundertakein-depthstudyanddevelopacloseunderstandingofthemostupdatedtheoriesandtechnicaldevelopmentsinth...

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• 【个人陈述】 留学文书写作范例－统...
  

  流萤思畔
  2016-12-08 12:18:05
  PersonalStatementAppliedProgram:StatisticsWhenIwasdoinginternshipattherenownedXXCosmeticsCo.Ltd,IwasdeeplyimpressedbythemottofromXX,thefounderofthecompany—“BelieveinMiracleandMiraclewillIndeedHappen.”AtonepointduringmyundergraduateeducationIwasveryfrustratedbecauseIfoundthat,duetothelackofeffectivemethodologyofnumericalanalysis,theteachingandtheresearchofeconomicsinChinalagsfarbehindtheinternationalstandardasrepresentedbythedevelopedcountriesoftheWest.Asaresult,eventhoughIamoneofthetopstudentsfromtheXXUniversityofFinanceandEconomics,Ifinditdifficultformetoreallyenterthetruerealmofeconomicsstudy.Insteadofdealingaheavyblowonme,thisdiscoverymotivatedmetomaximizemyeffortsinthestudyofmathematicsandtoapplyforanadvanceddegreeprograminstatisticsatyourwell-respecteduniversityafterhavingcompletedmyundergraduateprogram.Itismyconvictionthat,aslongasIhavesufficientconfidencemyselfandmakesufficientefforts,IamboundtoaccomplishsomeformofachievementsinthefieldofstatisticsandmakeduecontributionstothedevelopmentofquantitativeresearchineconomicsintheChineseacademia.Miraclewillindeedhappen.IspecializedinaccountingattheAccountingCollegeofXXUniversityofFinanceandEconomics.Anundergraduateeducationinthespecialtyofaccountingcoversknowledgeinawiderangeoffields—economics,managementscience,mathematics,statistics,andevensociology.Whileprovidingmewithasolidacademicfoundation,thiseducationhasenabledmetoferretouttheareasthatcanreallycapturemyinterest.Ihavecherishedastronginterestinmathematicssincetheprimaryschoolanddevelopedmytalentsallthewaythroughmymiddleandhighschool.ButitisonlythroughmyundergraduatestudythatIhavecometorealizethevitalimportanceofmathematicalapproachestothestudyofeconomics.Thisveryrealizationhasfurtherreinforcedmydeterminationtochoosethecareerofanappliedstatis...

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  留学归来不看路
  2016-12-08 11:45:34
  BY:JOHNA.BYRNEONMARCH23,2016ItallstartedinearlySeptemberof2012whenColumbiaBusinessSchoolProfessorGeertBekaertaskedaassistantprofessorhewasmentoringoutfordinner.EnrichettaRavina,whohadbeencollaboratingonanacademicresearchprojectwithBekaertfortwoandone-halfyears,hadnointerestinanythingotherthanaprofessionalrelationship.“Ihadabadfeelingaboutitandsaid,‘No,Iwasonadiet,’”recallsRavina,now40and11yearsyoungerthanBakaert.“Butthisprofessor(Bekaert)startedcomplainingthatIwouldgotodinnerwithotherpeopleandIwouldn’tgoouttodinnerwithhim.”Finally,sherelented,agreeingtoadinneronSept.28when,shesays,Bekaertbeganaskingherawkwardquestionsoverthetable.“HeaskedmeifIhadaboyfriendandifIlivedwithhim,”remembersRavina.“Isaid,‘LookthisisadinneramongcolleaguesandIappreciateourworktogetherandwanttocontinuetoworktogether.’Hestartedlaughing.”‘HEPUTHISHANDONMYBACKANDSLIDITDOWN’Aftertheirmeal,hegaveRavinaaridetoherapartmentinataxiandasshepreparedtoexit,“heputhishandonmybackandsliditdown,”sheasserts.“Irushedoutofthetaxi.”WhenRavina,whotaughtMBAsatColumbiathecorecorporatefinancecourse,returnedtocampusthefollowingday,thefacultymembersaysshewasuneasyaboutwhathappenedthepreviousevening.“Iwasextremelyworried,”shesaysnow.“Hewasaseniorcolleagueandwasassignedtomebymydepartment.Heseemedfriendlythenextdayanddidn’tseemoffendedatall.Then,hestartedtellingmeabouthissexualexploitsandhowmanywomenweregivinghimcompliments.”Now,Ravinahasfileda$20millionlawsuitagainstColumbiaUniversity,alleginggenderdiscrimination,ahostileworkenvironment,quidproquosexualharassment,retaliation,failuretopromote,andwrongfuldischarge.ACLASSICEXAMPLEOFAMENTORSHIPGONEHORRIBLYWRONGThehighlydetailed,44-pagec...

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  高中留学老大回
  2016-12-07 16:33:34
  慎用美式英语中一些含有否定意义的词汇BecarefulofusingwordsthathaveanegativemeaninginAmericanEnglish.Theword“propaganda,”forexample,meanssomethinglike“government-controlledbrainwashing”intheUS.(Yourbestchoiceistousethewords“marketing”or“publicity”ifyouwanttoindicatethatyouorganizedacampaigntoraiseawarenessofacertainproblem.)Likewise,intheUSwedonotusethewords“cripple”and“retarded”;weuse“handicapped”(orevenbetter,“disabled”)and“developmentallydisabled”or“mentallychallenged.”Wedon’tcalloldpeople“oldpeople”—wecallthem“elders”or“theelderly.”Andweprefer“businessperson”or“businessprofessional”to“businessman.”慎用美式英语中一些含有否定意义的词汇。例如，“propaganda”这个词在美国就有点“政府洗脑式”的宣传的意思了。（如果你想要表达你发起一项运动来提高人们对于某一问题的认识的话，最好选用“marketing”或是“publicity”。）同样的，在美国，我们也不会用“cripple”或者是“retarded”之类的词，取而代之的是“handicapped”（disabled更好）以及“developmentallydisabled”或“mentallydisabled”。我们在称呼老人时也不直接用“oldpeople”，而是用“elders”或是“theelderly”。我们也不经常用“businessman”，而是用“businessperson”或“businessprofessional”。变换句子的长短Varythelengthofthesentencesinyouressay.Ifyouhavewrittenseverallongsentencesinarow,insertashortsentencetogivethereaderabreak.Varietyinyoursentenceswillmakeyouressayeasiertoread(andthusmorememorable).ItalsodemonstratesthatyouhaveasuperiorcommandoftheEnglishlanguage.Anddon’tbeafraidof...

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• 【Essay/论文】 这篇essay很简单，却...
  

  高中留学老大回
  2016-12-02 10:50:09
  

  哈佛商学院（HBS），美国商学院三大巨头之一，也是世界上最好的商学院之一。申请HBS不仅要求超高的成绩、完美的简历或推荐信、优秀的课外活动、工作经历，文书也是影响申请成败的重要影响因素，在申请者自身实力相当的时候，文书能够打动招生官更是可以直接决定录取结果。作为研究院，哈佛商学院在录取时的文书题目比本科申请题目还要宽泛、还要考验写作功底。今天我们就来学习一篇哈佛商学院的文书范文。2013年,哈佛商学院文书的题目如下:You'reapplyingtoHarvardBusinessSchool.Wecanseeyourresume,schooltranscripts,extra-curricularactivities,awards,post-MBAcareergoals,testscoresandwhatyourrecommendershavetosayaboutyou.Whatelsewouldyoulikeustoknowasweconsideryourcandidacy?(Nowordlimit)你正在申请哈佛商学院.我们可以看到你的简历、学校成绩单、课外活动、奖项、工商管理硕士职业目标、考试分数和你的推荐者所说的关于你的事.那么,作为候选人,你还有什么是希望我们知道的?(无字数限制)也就是说,在你的文书中不能出现任何材料中已经提及的经历或过去,而是需要通过这篇文书补充一些招生官不了解的事情.那么该写些什么?如何去写?不妨让我们来看一篇范文.WhatelsewouldIlikeyoutoknow?IamwhoIamtodaymostlybecauseofmybrother[name].[name]wasbornwhenIwasfouryearsold,andhehadanextremelyrarebirthdefectcalledRobert'sSyndrome.Atthetime,hewasoneofahandfulintheworldtohaveit.Hewasbornwithoutarms,couldn'twalkortalk,andhadmanyotherseverephysicalandmentaldefects.Itwasacompleteshocktomyparents.Hewasonlyexpectedtoliveforadayortwo,butafterafewweeksinthehospitalhewashealthyenoughtocomehomewithus.Iwastooyoungtoreallyunderstandwhatwasgoingon;Iwasjustexcitedtohaveabrother.[name]wasafull-timejobforus.Forhisentirelifehewasincapableofdoinganythingforhimself.MyparentsandIdidn'thavemuch,butwedidhaveanamazingfamilyandgroupoffriendstosupportus.Wecouldn'thavetakencareof[name]withoutallofthem,andseeingthislevelofsacrificefromsomanypeoplehadahugeimpactonme.No...

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